Students might notice I tend to cross out "I think" and "In my opinion" on essays.
I understand why they're used. Ask the average person on the Internet, and
they will explain "I think" and "In my opinion" are used as a form of
politeness when posting opinions on message boards.
They add nothing of
significant value to the sentence though.
Think about this...
If someone at the racetrack came and said "I think No. 5 will win the next race," that would be an opinion right?
If someone at the racetrack came and said "No. 5 will win the next race," it would still be the same opinion!
At
least, the second guy sounds confident in his thoughts. Also, by using
"I think" and "In my opinion," the author is taking away attention from
the actual topic and placing it on the author, which is a bit
distracting.
So, try to minimize or eliminate altogether "I think" and "In my opinion."
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